For Rocket and Finn ... and other poets too

[Pale Horse]

Hannah*
by


Ward Rev. E.L. Crehtar:

Ah!
Anna hems party ruffles;
reknit strips on slip up lamina.
Time stops denim now.

Ergo, desserts deliver a deified
rail. A liar deified.

A reviled stressed ogre won.
Mined spots emit
animal pupils. No spirts tinker,
self fury traps me,
'Hannah' -
a rather clever draw.


*Hannah means 'Grace' in Hebrew


My original work....

[Rocket Surgeon]

Brilliant! I do need some more time to refelect on it though...interesting choices, pacing and turn of a phrase.

[Finn]

Seconded. Utter brilliance.

[Stoo]

That's one heck of a palindrome, Paley! Wow.:hat: Here's my meagre contribution:

"Able was I ere I saw Elba" - Napoleon Bonaparte

[AlivePoet]

Yes, this is good work. Didn't know you were a poet, PH. :hat:

(Apologies for the barely-adequate comment...I'll have more to say on this later, right now I'm just a little exhausted from the dance floor...)

[Nurhachi1991]

Changed my life