Nope, it's coming out good.
Another one of Indy's 1905 adventures. I read an article on starwars.com a while ago, indicating what most of the unproduced episodes would have been about. Did you read that one and made the 1905 idea into another story or did you work everything out on your own again.
Anyway, I really liked your first two stories, and I'm looking forward to read the 3rd one.