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Originally Posted by BrodyIsDead
Anyone read my story The Quest of The White Knight? I'd appreciate any thoughts, crits, questions about it - I'm a big fan of everything Indy and tried to refer to lots of the literature out there in my story - can anyone guess the two time periods the story was set in?  |
Welcome to you BrodyisDead... (Always nice to see another "Dead" member...
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I read your work and let me say that is the prize winner that I liked best.
I really felt like you developed existing characters in the Indy universe in an interesting way. I also liked how you brought back Marion and Marcus' private quest to find the Ark. The top two entries were well-written enough, but there's wasn't much in the way of character development or truly "outside the box" ideas for the Indy universe. I felt the were too safe and conventional.
(I might also note that your work could ALMOST lead into a larger work, like say... REALM OF THE DEAD. 
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