Col. Spalko
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Would anyone be interested in reading one? I'm in the process of writing it so I will post it here is anyone wants to see it.
Col. Spalko said:haha no it's not.
Meerkat said:I considered IrinaxDovchenko (yes, Irina would be dominant) once, but it didn't work out for me :\ IrinaxIndy seemed better, but I can still imagine Irina might have had some sort of relationship with Dovchenko?
Mel- I read your Eryka-Jennifer Spalko fic. Irina does seem OOC, and there are some grammar mistakes. I'm undecided about your character; analyzing and critiquing that part of stories has always been my weakness?
Overall, it's a great first fanfiction (I can assure you that my first tries were much worse), but there's room for improvement.
The concept of the story is really interesting, though. I have written scenes for my own IrinaxIndy family (none of which I've posted online, however) and I'm curious about other stories with similar ideas.
I'm sorry to hear that, MelXanaduMel said:I actually got the idea of the Character on a very close friend of mine who encouraged me to be an artist and author in the future.Who's name was also Eryka-Jennifer. Sadly she passed away last year, so I used the name in her honor.
XanaduMel said:Thank you,
I always love to get help on ways to improve.
I actually got the idea of the Character on a very close friend of mine who encouraged me to be an artist and author in the future.Who's name was also Eryka-Jennifer. Sadly she passed away last year, so I used the name in her honor. I don't even remember where I got the idea for the story from, but I had it in my head for a long time before I finally decided to write it down.