ClintonHammond
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Maybe you should take a literature class about internal consistency...
"from what I know of A means that if you add B it must equal C"
Isn't the point at all....
In one situation, the creature reacts in one way... in the next similar situation, the creature acts in a way that completely runs contrary to the first situation.... It's a symptom of lousy story telling, plain and simple.
it begs the unanswered question yet again.... "If that little, big-eyed, turd-looking puppet can fly, how the F did he get left behind in the first place?!?!?!" The easy (But lame) answer is that if he hadn't there wouldn't have been a story to tell.... Man, wouldn't that have been nice!
I suspect there's so much hew and cry because it stings so much to have something you've looked at for so long and never really seen, thrown suddenly into such harsh and revealing light. Like seeing your favourite supermodel without her makeup on, and under florescent lights...
Or .... You create a thing in your story that allows some people to do some seemingly miraculous things, and you have a character explain that it is a 'force' created by all living things that people can control if they're taught.... It then destroys your internal consistency to have that character later, in a flash back, discover that, in fact it's actually a parasitical bug in ones blood.... Would you buy that? Oh... wait... maybe you would....
"from what I know of A means that if you add B it must equal C"
Isn't the point at all....
In one situation, the creature reacts in one way... in the next similar situation, the creature acts in a way that completely runs contrary to the first situation.... It's a symptom of lousy story telling, plain and simple.
it begs the unanswered question yet again.... "If that little, big-eyed, turd-looking puppet can fly, how the F did he get left behind in the first place?!?!?!" The easy (But lame) answer is that if he hadn't there wouldn't have been a story to tell.... Man, wouldn't that have been nice!
I suspect there's so much hew and cry because it stings so much to have something you've looked at for so long and never really seen, thrown suddenly into such harsh and revealing light. Like seeing your favourite supermodel without her makeup on, and under florescent lights...
Or .... You create a thing in your story that allows some people to do some seemingly miraculous things, and you have a character explain that it is a 'force' created by all living things that people can control if they're taught.... It then destroys your internal consistency to have that character later, in a flash back, discover that, in fact it's actually a parasitical bug in ones blood.... Would you buy that? Oh... wait... maybe you would....
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