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Old 12-07-2010, 09:21 AM   #1
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Irina/Dovchenko Fanfic?

Would anyone be interested in reading one? I'm in the process of writing it so I will post it here is anyone wants to see it.
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Old 12-07-2010, 10:29 AM   #2
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If its of good quality and isn't out of character for the both of them...sure, I'll take a peek.
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Old 12-07-2010, 10:32 AM   #3
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Yay! <3

It may be a little out of character but not by huge leaps and bounds. Irina isn't turning into a valley girl and Dovchenko is still pretty cold blooded.
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Old 12-07-2010, 06:46 PM   #4
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Is this the one Ive seen posted on fanfiction.net?
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Old 12-07-2010, 10:07 PM   #5
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haha no it's not.
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Old 12-08-2010, 10:16 AM   #6
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haha no it's not.

Oh, okay, sorry.
I actually haven't read it, I have just noticed it on there.
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Old 12-08-2010, 11:36 AM   #7
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haha I just posted it on there today.
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Old 12-08-2010, 12:27 PM   #8
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my bad, double post... XP

Here it is if yall wanna read it: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6539388/..._and_Dovchenko
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Old 12-08-2010, 03:05 PM   #9
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I will read it tonight, and tell you what I think tomorrow. Here's hoping it's great!
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Old 12-08-2010, 03:17 PM   #10
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thanks! haha I hope it's good too, this is my first fan fic.
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Old 12-13-2010, 11:43 AM   #11
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I finished reading it, and I'm about to PM you, Col. Spalko, to tell you what I think. I'm not sure if you're the type who wants their feedback available for everyone to read, so that's why I'm playing it safe and going with a PM. So, go check your inbox!
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Old 12-13-2010, 02:35 PM   #12
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lol, thanks I got it. Very helpful! <33
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Old 12-18-2010, 08:43 PM   #13
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I considered IrinaxDovchenko (yes, Irina would be dominant) once, but it didn't work out for me :\ IrinaxIndy seemed better, but I can still imagine Irina might have had some sort of relationship with Dovchenko…
Mel- I read your Eryka-Jennifer Spalko fic. Irina does seem OOC, and there are some grammar mistakes. I'm undecided about your character; analyzing and critiquing that part of stories has always been my weakness…
Overall, it's a great first fanfiction (I can assure you that my first tries were much worse), but there's room for improvement.

The concept of the story is really interesting, though. I have written scenes for my own IrinaxIndy family (none of which I've posted online, however) and I'm curious about other stories with similar ideas.

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Old 12-19-2010, 06:46 AM   #14
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I considered IrinaxDovchenko (yes, Irina would be dominant) once, but it didn't work out for me :\ IrinaxIndy seemed better, but I can still imagine Irina might have had some sort of relationship with Dovchenko…
Mel- I read your Eryka-Jennifer Spalko fic. Irina does seem OOC, and there are some grammar mistakes. I'm undecided about your character; analyzing and critiquing that part of stories has always been my weakness…
Overall, it's a great first fanfiction (I can assure you that my first tries were much worse), but there's room for improvement.

The concept of the story is really interesting, though. I have written scenes for my own IrinaxIndy family (none of which I've posted online, however) and I'm curious about other stories with similar ideas.


Thank you,
I always love to get help on ways to improve.
I actually got the idea of the Character on a very close friend of mine who encouraged me to be an artist and author in the future.Who's name was also Eryka-Jennifer. Sadly she passed away last year, so I used the name in her honor. I don't even remember where I got the idea for the story from, but I had it in my head for a long time before I finally decided to write it down.
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Old 12-19-2010, 12:14 PM   #15
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I actually got the idea of the Character on a very close friend of mine who encouraged me to be an artist and author in the future.Who's name was also Eryka-Jennifer. Sadly she passed away last year, so I used the name in her honor.
I'm sorry to hear that, Mel
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Old 12-19-2010, 11:11 PM   #16
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Thank you,
I always love to get help on ways to improve.
I actually got the idea of the Character on a very close friend of mine who encouraged me to be an artist and author in the future.Who's name was also Eryka-Jennifer. Sadly she passed away last year, so I used the name in her honor. I don't even remember where I got the idea for the story from, but I had it in my head for a long time before I finally decided to write it down.

Aw, Mel, I'm sorry. :/
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Old 12-20-2010, 11:46 AM   #17
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It's ok I have learned to get over the loss.

She isn't the first close friend I have known to die.
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Old 12-20-2010, 12:29 PM   #18
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i've not ever had someone close pass away. :/
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Old 12-20-2010, 12:32 PM   #19
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You are very lucky, I have lost 3 people, maybe 4 and I haven't even reached the age of 15.
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Old 12-20-2010, 03:11 PM   #20
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That's not good.
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Old 12-20-2010, 03:53 PM   #21
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It's probably why I always write depressing stories in English class.
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Old 12-20-2010, 09:09 PM   #22
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Well, that could be reason. :C
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