poetry

Indy Scout 117

New member
how many of you guys like poetry??? if you do, please post some of your work! i'd love to see them. :D

heres one of mine:

Fantasy Girl

Guys dont lie,
we all have a fantasy girl.
Each one different and unique,
so beautiful and charming.
The girls of our dreams and romantic fantasies,
the one we're not likely to meet,
but will always have.
The girl who wont leave you,
who will always love you for who you are.
She's the perfect girl,
your mental significant other.
She cant get out of your head,
but wont become a reality because chances are out of the millions of women to meet she's not among them.
But you dont worry,
because when times get rough and your heart gets broken,
she is still there in your head to give you mental warmth.
She loves you, you love her.
A love that cannot be broken by anything.
She is in your heart, mind, and soul.
You will grow old together and you've been married since childhood.
The perfect girl cannot be found on this Earth,
but can only be found in your mind.

what do you think?????
 

The_Raiders

Well-known member
Pretty good. Thought I found mine, but that went to hell in a handbasket. I think the mods will be mighty proud of me that I searched for a thread for once instead of just making one. I've been writing poetry/songs for some time now. Really it is a great escape for me. Here's one of mine.

Cosmic Night

Go to rest again
Lay down to sleep
A night after nights
Hazey dreams repeat
Escape your body
Fly out of your mind
To pillars in the sky
Where planets roam
And stars shine
Fly through blue moons
That orbit the tips of a trident spear
Neptunes home in the ocean
A thousand purple fish swim
In a dark blue satin sheet
Fleets of whales clamber by
As you roam the night sky
The mans stolen wallet on a hazel table
In the tavern of town
Go down in dreams beware
Enter a new mind
Of earth in mid-air
Glide through streams of light
Of ongoing stars
The beautiful night
Shimmery realms in the sky
Glowing bright
How I love to hold you on our midnight flight
Green-purple paintbrush across the universe
With noisy machines sailing by
A modern mind with an ancient knowledge
Of all we've ever known
Blue moon smiles at you
Down in your mind
Where you swim and feast on life
Forever going
Gone
Morning, morning
Never forget the dream of being
It was more real than living
So long moon dweller of night
I can reach you in my minds delight
Where no one else can go
I will follow
Silky sunshine of color
Bright ornimental pillars
Rainbows of no opacity
Can you get the image?
Can you stand by?
And let the world turn?
Without your plunders that you earn with sleep?
Falling back down
Forever
 

Gear

New member
I like sharing words, so kudos to the aboves.



One of the loneliest times I've had
With subdued, sweet heart ache
It was so curious
The distance measured out in valleys, rugged hill-peaks, fields, highways, railroad tracks
Telephone poles, bridges, falling suns, flaring horizons
Many of these my own
Even the stars seemed closer than that
 
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